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"Dada Dada Dada, come make a poem with me" by Tristan Tzaraman - Lunoor - 11-04-2010
Create a collaborative dada poem by choosing a paragraph from some media such as a magazine. Cut the paragraph up into words. Select words at random from dada bowl or hat and assemble them into a stanza in the order that the words are pulled dada daddy and ma ma ma maaa. Stanza structure is your choice. I will post the first one on this thread and whomever wants to can copy and paste it and add their own stanza and we can build a poem this way and see what it reveals or how it pulls up its nappies.
I don't know how many will participate in this. If its quite a few then the poem will be finished when the last person adds their stanza, or if not many participate we can each do more than one stanza and set a limit on it if we like or it would be really interesting to just watch it grow indefinitely. An endless poem, mama....
"Dada Dada Dada, come make a poem with me" by Tristan Tzaraman - Lunoor - 11-04-2010
Self-confidence stepped
"O-o-oh!"
Llamas round saying stetson insolently.
Tassels wore camels, caramel, blazed.
With equal and air they poise stared pursing--
bright of air. Sun but to spotted us:
wool red at if as their equal;
of lips their an sewn me
not as.
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Well, I found out my small paragraph has a lot of words : D
I structured it as I liked keeping the order the words were pulled in and added the punctuation I wanted, except for the O-o-oh! which is how it was typed.
Whose next? : D
"Dada Dada Dada, come make a poem with me" by Tristan Tzaraman - Lunoor - 11-16-2010
Oh man, only 8 of you mofo's looked at this : D
"Dada Dada Dada, come make a poem with me" by Tristan Tzaraman - Wei Shan Yang - 11-16-2010
I'll do a stanza...give me a bit of time. Ok, off to locate a mag.
"Dada Dada Dada, come make a poem with me" by Tristan Tzaraman - Wei Shan Yang - 11-16-2010
Self-confidence stepped
"O-o-oh!"
Llamas round saying stetson insolently.
Tassels wore camels, caramel, blazed.
With equal and air they poise stared pursing--
bright of air. Sun but to spotted us:
wool red at if as their equal;
of lips their an sewn me
not as.
Tianjin casts from engaged light.
Book excited October in dim holiday
About train my tickets scored forth her Meihekou--a flickering during conversation.
Wife only my cabin...breathing, sleeping... pale two plume (sleeper across each is oversee).
Below rolled hours from back five can.
Outline ladies had image ago having black hair.
The We Just and a of.
Elderly to I out soft the set.
The of and the.
"Dada Dada Dada, come make a poem with me" by Tristan Tzaraman - Lunoor - 11-17-2010
Thanks Wei, yeah it's shaping now
oh come someone and put a little more magick here
"Dada Dada Dada, come make a poem with me" by Tristan Tzaraman - Guest - 08-21-2019