04-28-2018, 12:00 AM
Individually the three backgrounds are great. Together they are not aligned. The sunny skies don't match the deeper blue sky. The sunny water doesn't match the nighttime lit water.
Also, how does the background reflect the site? The background is a beautiful portrait of materialism. The people of Sorcery aren't portraits of materialism. They are from middle or low class economic backgrounds. They are also very earthy and spiritual. They probably don't spend much time in hotels like this. Instead, they probably spend a lot time in nature, raw environments. I hate writing prompts myself, but a picture prompt may serve you some way: how can you showcase the natural beauty of spring or summer?
Your winter was so natural, raw, and silent. Nature brings peace (and chaos), depending on how you capture it. Capture it any way you desire, but it would be lovely if you would capture nature in some fashion.
I'm excited you're working on it
Also, how does the background reflect the site? The background is a beautiful portrait of materialism. The people of Sorcery aren't portraits of materialism. They are from middle or low class economic backgrounds. They are also very earthy and spiritual. They probably don't spend much time in hotels like this. Instead, they probably spend a lot time in nature, raw environments. I hate writing prompts myself, but a picture prompt may serve you some way: how can you showcase the natural beauty of spring or summer?
Your winter was so natural, raw, and silent. Nature brings peace (and chaos), depending on how you capture it. Capture it any way you desire, but it would be lovely if you would capture nature in some fashion.
I'm excited you're working on it