Edit?

[serloco]

Hey can someone edit my poem in Stalking section titles "personal history"? Sorry if it is a big deal, I am kind of a perfectionist. I want it to be titled "Personally" and written like this.. 

They said do not take things personlly, but sometimes it seems like everything is made just for me! My eyes walk on the painted canvass of my dreams. What is within shines out, and in this there is no doubt. Even when small and humble and reality is a thunderous rumble, it is within me that aligns to make my self-importance crumble. Just the perfection of an Infinite lesson. Another form of reflection. Yet I must make the first step indeed, for it is me that must water the seed. And so how can I not take things personally, when the songs being sung are of my own personal history? Perhaps I am just being a tool, yet I see my perception is an Infinite fuel!! So large and so small, with so high to fall. The ups and the downs, having a ball (like a clown), and yet deadly serious while awaiting the sound. Ready to listen and so to never be bound, peering into Infinity with my feet on the ground.

[watergaze]

edited.
I also corrected personlly to personally (if that was being overzealous on my part let me know heh, I will revert it back)
I hope you wanted it in prose form (not separated into free verse) on purpose too.

for the future: these requests are made directly in the [link=http://sorcery.yuku.com/topic/4218/Admi ... onal-Stuff]Admin/Mod Log[/link].
please provide a link to the thread/post you would like edited.. it makes it easier for the moderators, saves time when one does not need to go look for it.

Note: I hope you noticed we have a section for original art of our users: [link=http://sorcery.yuku.com/forums/162/Our-Gallery]Our Gallery[/link]. Poems would be more suited there than in stalking imo. Some might be moved later by the mods.
Poems like for example [link=http://sorcery.yuku.com/topic/5969/Love]Love[/link] will be moved to art section, it is not suited for stalking
and a thread like [link=http://sorcery.yuku.com/topic/5971/Music]Music[/link] is also not suited for the general stalking section. We have [link=http://sorcery.yuku.com/forums/14]The Tonal[/link] for that. If you intended some stalking be done with it, you should put in words into the post to indicate that and what exactly you see in the vid and such, not just the vid. And even then we have a sub forum for that in The Tonal, depending on where you go with the post you can put it either in [link=http://sorcery.yuku.com/forums/165/Sorceric]Sorceric Topics[/link] or [link=http://sorcery.yuku.com/forums/164/Unde ... KqRWStcVDo]Under the Lens[/link]

[serloco]

Alright.. and thank you..

[watergaze]

you're welcome and feel free to request edits any time

[Billy]

watergaze, please edit (stalker payground thread) title to read: Kaomea freak show (self-shaming self for Billy) {http://sorcery.yuku.com/topic/6277/Kaom ... -for-Billy}   So, that is a change from herself to self.  Later, I would like to change that to himself when having confirmation.



Some certain person has need of LINK with declaration, acclamation, affirmation, connotation, confirmation, asperation, inspiration, edification, and imagination....   and not repudiation, abomination, exterpation, constipation, analyzation, trepidation, obfuscation, suffucation, and retardation.


A certain person will like this LINK:
http://www.telegraph.co.uk/women/womens ... le-me.html


thank you, watergaze
love, Billy

[Billy]

watergaze, please disregard previous request.  Thank you.

[Guest]

Resolved. Thread closed.

[Guest]