My Music

[someguy]

I started writing music again a few months ago, so far I made 28 songs and 27 are posted, most of the songs started as drum beats and morphed into what they
are.


anyway, they are pretty much heavy metal songs with a samba song mixed in there and an 80's(to me) type song.




if you want to check it out they are all at http://www.reverbnation.com/xtt - the song "warning" is
about time travel.




any feedback would be appreciated

[bluedreamer]

Hey someguy, I listened to Warning and am listening to Lucky 13, 13 one of my favorite numbers, I like , can you post the lyrics for Warning?




Thanks for posting your music.

[someguy]

hey bluedreamer, thanks for checking my tunes!




here are the lyrics to warning:


*** you from the future


you will listen to what I say


you'll be fucked tomorrow


for all your **** today




warning (repeats)


dont *** around




time travelers coming for you


cause they cant ignore you


they will see results and divergence


and you will know you deserve it




warning (repeats)


dont *** around




*** you from the future


*** you from the past


I am breaking through


and my changes will last




warning (repeats)


dont *** around




coming down from the ground


see what has come around


lightning strikes


see a path follow from new light

[bluedreamer]

Am listening to instrumental # 21 now : ), nice rhythm/bass guitar and cymbal crashes and nice angular lead solo, very cool song! i ma enjoying it much!




but the end ends so abruptly , sounds like it was cut off before it was over, was it?




I am playing it again for the third time

[someguy]

Hi Bluedreamer, yes that is the whole song, I was going with keeping them short and simple so they wouldnt drag out, especially because they are mostly
instrumentals, its tough to get people to sing on them and they (friends or family) always want me to write the lyrics which I have no problem with but
actually getting them to sing is the problem, no one has time anymore, always preoccupied, haha!

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