08-11-2009, 12:00 AM
Thanks docta Lee, it's one of my better ones, one of the kinds that that which the fiction I identify(ed) as I didn't write, especially back then as I
was 90% **** back then, lol, now it might be around 80%!
1% carries a lot of value though, i look back and I can tell.
I've been thinking about the poem in terms of don juan's syntax.
It occured to me that maybe the ones who walk follow each other in turn, now who is the worm?
I think I'm going up there to change the way it's lined out , i think it would work better.
see ya
was 90% **** back then, lol, now it might be around 80%!
1% carries a lot of value though, i look back and I can tell.
I've been thinking about the poem in terms of don juan's syntax.
It occured to me that maybe the ones who walk follow each other in turn, now who is the worm?
I think I'm going up there to change the way it's lined out , i think it would work better.
see ya